When I was done it was time to nap ( for the babies ) , so we had TQ in her room to take a nap, and me, my mom and TL were in a different room . My mom read a few Vietnamese books and we TL went to sleep . So my mom got out of the bed and went on the computer and told me that I can have a gummy worm , I did ,when we were sitting we saw Robin ( our neighbor ) and my friend . She talks vary loud and don’t want TQ to wake up so I rushed out side and shhhhed her . She asked if I can come over a go to the park . I said I can so I did . When we got there some teenagers were there and we didn’t feel safe because they were saying bad words like _ _ _ and _ _ _ _ so we went back with our wheels ( we were riding our bike and scooter ). Then Robin asked me if I can come over and I say “I’ll go ask ” . My mom said I can but I need to take a shower first I told and she said she would have to take my friend home so she did . Then my family went to get new furniture . We bought one but it was for shipping and that was my day bye ! 8)
another intesreting diary. I wish you had taken some time to add comma and period more often so that it’s easier to follow. It may be tedious at first but once you get used to it, you will like it. I promise! 🙂
in my humble opinion, this writing is graded: B+
good start con gái, that’s what I’m talking about. Keep writing and you’ll get better
really ! I was thinking of a A-